Writer's Quill
Brush Creek
At the edge of our property stands a forest with a fair-sized waterfall, full of sound and life. The woods have shrunk over the years, though the creek remains unchanged. Sarah couldn’t have been far ahead—I heard her laughing and playing with our terrier, Pip.
As I headed deeper toward the water, she suddenly yelled, “Benjamin, is that you? Please answer if it’s you!” I sensed fear in her voice.
Years ago, Indians had killed a family near here. Though they are long gone now, folks still carry unease.
Pip barked excitedly as I called back, “Yes, it’s me!” She waited for us so we could wade and catch crawfish for supper.
Later at the dinner table, Mother told us how, as a child, she once heard what sounded like a bellow of war cries from these same woods—though no one had been there. Those eerie screams haunted her. Sometimes, she still sees a flicker of movement or shadow out the corner of her eye, and that same terror returns.
The Lasting Chirp
“Benjamin, where did it go?” Sarah demanded.
“Be still,” I whispered. “You’ll scare him off.”
“But where is he?”
“Right on top of—” A sudden loud chirp cut me off as the tiny frog sounded from the crown of her hat. I burst out laughing as she jumped, and the frog jumped with her.
“You’re not afraid of a Spring Peeper, are you?” I teased.
“No!” she insisted—right before her foot slipped in the mud and she toppled backward into the creek. For a second I thought she’d twisted her ankle, but she pulled off each shoe and threw them at me.
“I hate you, Benjamin Marshall!” she yelled, laughing and crying all at once. “This was my new dress!”
I helped her up and gathered her shoes.
“Well… it was funny from my perspective.”
“Everything is funny from your perspective.” Then she wrapped me in a big, muddy hug, and we hurried home for supper.
Returning Home
“Oh, Ma, I’m so glad Father will be home today,” Sarah said. “Benjamin and I’ve missed him so.”
Mother hugged us both. “I miss him too.” Pip barked, sitting upright as if he wished to add his own thoughts.
Father had gone to Jamestown to bury his brother, Uncle Paul, who had died of tuberculosis. Someone had needed to stay behind to harvest the corn and wheat.
Before Grandpa passed, he’d told us, “Death separates us all. It closes one’s time here. It’s in the Lord alone we reunite.”
Mother added softly, “Our hearts are often heavy. Why don’t you two take Pip and play at the creek? I’ll holler if your father comes early.”
We ran to the waterfall, hoping its laughter would wash away our sorrow.
Later, I heard a chuckle. Father crept behind Sarah, then burst into the biggest water fight we ever had. As he splashed us, joy returning to his face, I knew we’d be all right once more.
The Sled Ride
Our cheeks tingled from the crisp air. At last, a glistening layer of snow lay across Brush Creek. Father had prepared two of his childhood sleds—fresh wax, new steering ropes.
We dragged them to the highest hill. “We’ll pick up some speed from here,” I told Sarah.
I went first, forgetting the danger below.
“Ben! Stop!” she shouted, chasing me with Pip at her heels.
But I was flying. The icy river rushed toward me. “Help! Somebody help me—I’m scared!”
Then the sled hit a mound of snow and buried itself in another. Had I gone one foot farther, I might’ve frozen or drowned.
Sarah and Pip reached me as I stood up, shaken.
“Don’t ever do that again, Benjamin. I was frightened.”
“Me too, sis.”
We retrieved the sleds and hurried home, recounting the event to Mother and Father. Grandmother brought us dandelion tea as we warmed by the fire, grateful to be safe.
Meadows Pond
We saw a duck in distress today, and Sarah nearly drowned trying to reach it. Without thinking, she rushed into the pond after Mother.
“Ma, look!” I cried. “It’s Sarah!”
Sarah slipped beneath the water. Mother turned to grab her, but both struggled as Sarah panicked. I yelled for help—my voice cracking with fear.
Father tore down the hill, jumped in, and hauled Sarah to safety. His anger barely masked his terror.
“What were you two thinking?” he demanded.
Then I remembered the duck. Father swam back out and rescued it—its wing torn. He carried it to the barn.
Sarah named him George, after our baby brother Mother lost years before. Mother and Father exchanged a look, full of memories.
We’d never been swimmers, so we stuck to the shallows. But Mother had wanted us to soak our feet in the sunny pond, and she’d packed a picnic.
After the rescue, Sarah clung to us, not afraid of death—only of leaving her loved ones too soon.
When we finally returned to the pond’s edge, we ate our picnic and dipped our feet in the shimmering water, thanking God for turning our terror into gratitude.
The Whirlwind
“We escaped the worst of it,” Father said, “but others weren’t so blessed. The Lester family lost everything. And the Collins children… the tornado took their parents.”
“What’ll happen to John-Robert, Daisy-May, and Molly?” Sarah asked.
“Cousin Annabelle has agreed to take them in,” Mother answered gently.
That twister had roared across the ridge like a living beast, headed straight for us—until, as if by God’s hand, it veered away.
Sean and his two children arrived to stay with us awhile. We cleaned the guest room, Mother warmed supper, and Father welcomed them inside.
That night the house felt strangely quiet, heavy with shared grief. Father and Sean sat out by the pond, talking low while we children tried our best to settle. Preston and Scarlette whispered together on their bedroll, Sarah kept close to Mother, and I lay awake listening to the soft sounds of the night. It felt as if the whole house was holding its breath, waiting for the sorrow to ease just enough for sleep to find us.
Later, Sean entered, shaken. Father followed, resting a hand on my head. “Benjamin, go on to bed.”
He told Mother quietly, “All the fish are gone. Tornado drained two-thirds of the pond.”
Mother sighed, then said softly, “Well—least the twister had a bit of water to wash down that lunch of fish.”
Father chuckled. Soon, reluctant giggles drifted through the house—little lights blooming in the dark.
Sunday's Sermon
It was hot enough last Sunday to bake bread on a rock, but our family sat through the pastor’s sermon without fidgeting—not even the cool creek or shaded forest tempted us away. He preached on Jonah and the whale: a chilling tale in that sweltering church.
Afterward Father asked, “What’d you two think? You didn’t whisper once.”
“It reminded me of when the earth swallowed those Jews in the book of Numbers,” Sarah said.
“And of that robber down in Louisiana who got eaten by an alligator,” I added.
Mother nodded. “The wages of sin is death.”
Sarah and I exchanged wide-eyed looks and decided to confess our sins before supper. Neither of us wanted to be eaten—by whale or gator. At least Jonah lived to tell his tale.
Where the Mountains Keep Their Memory
The morning mist clung soft to the Appalachian peaks, laying itself in veils of silver and blue across the ridges. Dew shimmered on the fields like threads in a woven blanket, and the haze rolled over Brush Creek just the way it had when Sarah and I were children—steady, patient, unchanged.
We stood on the porch we’d grown up on. Sarah stared out over the wildflower fields, the berry thickets, the creek where we used to splash barefoot until Ma hollered us in for supper.
Her voice trembled. “Feels like I can scarce remember that girl now, Benjamin.” She paused, eyes drifting toward the far ridge. “And I miss him so much. Why’d the Lord take him so soon? Why’d he have to leave me and the young’uns?”
Before I could answer, she slipped inside, the porch door creaking the way it always had. I followed into the warm smell of wood smoke and rising bread. Ada’s lavender sachets hung from pegs along the wall, the soft scent settling into the room.
Ellie came darting out from behind Ada’s skirts like a burst of sunshine, flinging her arms around Sarah’s waist and babbling about squirrels and a blue-green beetle. Eli lingered beside me, nudging a loose floorboard with his boot. Russ the raccoon perched on his shoulder—fidgety, alert, whiskers twitching like he wasn’t entirely committed to behaving.
“Mama!” Ellie squealed—an echo of the bright laughter Sarah used to carry.
Ada and I cleared space at the table. I pulled out a chair. “You look right worn out, sis. Ada’s got coffee boilin’. Sit a spell.”
Sarah tried to smile and followed Ada toward the stove.
A knock sounded. Sam Hemlock stood on the porch, shoulders squared, brow pulled tight. He held a warm blackberry pie—his idea of welcome and duty rolled into one.
“Heard your sister was back,” he said gruffly. “Figured I’d bring somethin’ by.”
“That’s kind of you,” I said, taking the pie. “She’ll be glad for it.”
Sam’s eyes lingered on Sarah’s traveling dress—city-made, finer than what folks wore up here—and on the way her hair was pinned in a city style. He cleared his throat. “We’re simple folk up here in Brush Creek. Folks look out for one another. Always have.”
Sarah stiffened.
I stepped in. “We know, Sam. And we’re thankful.”
He nodded but added, halfway down the steps, “Just remember—these mountains keep their memories.”
His boots thudded away, leaving a knot of worry tightening in my gut. I watched his shadow vanish into the mist—and for the first time since Sarah arrived, I knew how much she’d been carrying.
Sam meant no harm. But tradition carried weight here. A welcome could also be a warning.
Inside, Eli peered out the window, Russ shifting restlessly on his shoulder. “Uncle Ben? What’d he mean?”
I crouched beside him. “Brush Creek’s been here longer’n any of us,” I said quietly. “It remembers folks who treat it right—and folks who don’t.” I nodded toward the mist-wrapped peaks. “These mountains have watched a lot of people come and go. This land… it keeps its stories.”
Russ reached out a paw toward Eli’s cheek, unsettled by the talk.
Sarah watched from the table, her face tired but guarded. Ada poured her a cup of thin black coffee—the mountain cure-all—hoping it would steady her.
Later that evening, after the children had fallen asleep and fireflies drifted through the yard like wandering stars, Sarah settled onto the porch swing. The wood creaked beneath her. Eli slept inside with Russ curled against him, the raccoon twitching in some wild dream.
Ada joined me by the railing. “You think Sam meant Sarah needs to find her place again?” she murmured.
“It ain’t about earnin’ a place,” I said. “It’s about rememberin’ it. This land’s older than all of us. Folks belong to it as much as it belongs to them.”
Ada leaned into me. “She feels lost.”
The porch swing creaked softly—Sarah must’ve heard. I walked over and sat beside her, slipping an arm around her shoulders.
“You’re home now,” I said. “After Ron passed, we prayed you’d come back. And maybe, in time, you’ll find that girl who used to run barefoot through these fields like nothin’ in this world could break her.”
The fireflies blinked slow and steady across the yard—quiet, patient, full of memory.
The next morning the sun rose slow over Brush Creek, catching on the ridgelines with soft gold. Dew clung to every blade of grass like tiny sparks, and the air carried that clean, woodsmoke bite that made the world feel honest. Ada was already on the porch, sleeves rolled above her elbows, humming a little hymn as she pumped water into the washbasin.
Sarah stepped out beside her, rubbing sleep from her eyes. Her hair was plaited loose down her back—less city, more mountain—and for a moment she looked almost like the girl who used to chase fireflies and holler across the creek.
“Let me help,” she said.
Ada smiled. “Washday’s hard work, even for folks used to it.”
“I’d like to try.”
Ellie spun around the porch with her clothespin doll. Eli hung near the steps with Russ perched on his shoulder, the raccoon’s tail twitching with mischief.
“Mind that critter now,” I warned. “Last thing we need’s Russ thinkin’ washday’s an invitation.”
Sarah lifted the heavy basin, arms trembling with the weight. She took two careful steps before the water sloshed hard against the rim.
Russ perked up. Water was his favorite kind of trouble.
Before Eli could stop him, Russ scrambled down his arm, hopped onto the washstand, and—with the bold confidence only a raccoon could muster—hooked the basin’s rim.
The basin flipped.
Water flew.
Sarah shrieked.
Ada gasped. Russ tumbled backward with an offended squeal.
And muddy water splashed across the porch, the laundry, Russ, Sarah, Ada—and my boots.
For a heartbeat, no one breathed.
Then Ada laughed—a warm, ringing sound. Ellie squealed. Eli giggled. Even I grinned.
Slowly—Sarah laughed too.
It was soft at first, delicate as something unused. But it grew, brightening her face.
“I look like a drowned cat,” she gasped.
For the first time since she’d come home, Sarah wasn’t just surviving the day. She was laughing—and the mountains were listening.
“You look like you belonged here all along,” Ada said.
We set to work cleaning up. As we scrubbed and wrung out laundry, Sarah hummed an old mountain tune—soft, unsure, but familiar.
“She’s come back to herself some,” Ada whispered.
I watched Sarah laugh with Ellie over a stubborn sheet and felt hope rise in me.
“Reckon the mountains remember her too,” I murmured.
Brush Creek remembered her, I thought. And maybe she was starting to remember herself.
By mid-afternoon, the holler had gone quiet in that way it does before a storm, when even the wind holds its breath. Leaves showed their pale undersides, trembling in the rising gusts. Across the ridge, the mountains tightened like a quilt bracing for a shake.
Inside, Ada shelled beans. Eli whittled. Russ sprawled belly-up. Near the open window, Ellie and Sarah threaded wildflower crowns.
Then the first rumble rolled through Brush Creek.
Ellie startled and buried her face in Sarah. Sarah held her, forcing a smile, though thunder had never sat well with her.
“All right now,” I said, rising. “Seems to me this is a good evenin’ for a story.”
I lifted an old canning jar from the mantel—cloudy, dented, familiar.
“You know, little one,” I told Ellie, “folks ’round here used to catch thunder in jars.”
Her eyes widened. “Catch… thunder?”
“Oh sure. Back in your granddaddy’s day, when the sky growled somethin’ fierce, he’d run out with a jar. And when thunder rolled down the ridge like a big ol’ barrel, he’d snatch a piece before it hit the ground.”
Another crash shook the cabin. Ellie whimpered. Sarah flinched.
I twisted the lid shut right as the thunder cracked.
Held it tight. Let it tremble in my hand.
Ellie gasped. Eli’s mouth dropped open. Even Sarah leaned forward.
The jar settled.
“There,” I whispered. “Caught us a bit of mountain thunder.”
The storm softened. Rain hammered the roof. Lightning faded to a lantern-glow behind clouds.
Ellie curled into Sarah’s lap. Eli and Russ watched the storm fade. Ada hummed a tune her grandmother taught her.
I set the Thunder Jar on the mantel, where it caught the firelight and shimmered faintly—just enough to look like something lived inside.
Sarah held her children close. A quiet smile touched her lips.
Brush Creek, I thought, was startin’ its work on her.
And she was startin’ to let it.
And somewhere beyond the ridge, the mountains carried her memory, gentle as a promise.